What I found challenging. To write such a long story.
What I found interesting. I found it interesting that the background was quite a good idea.
My favourite part. Was the background.
Friday, 14 May 2021
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Hi Isabella :D
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post about going to the beach!! I saw some grammer mistakes but thats ok, I love how you added so much detail!!! I'm also glad you enjoyed your time there cause I'm not a fan of the beach. Buh Bye!! :D
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Isabella
Kia ora Isabella,
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like Zed loves the beach. Do you?
What was your Learning Intention? Why are you learning that? How do you know if you have achieved it? Maybe this is some information people need to know when they are reading your blog.
Did you reread this before you published it? Some of your recount doesn't make sense.
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Mrs Naden