Thursday, 12 August 2021

Sophie Pascoe Report

In class we are learning to use paragraphs. We had to stick to one topic in our paragraphs. We also had to use a first sentence that is my topic sentence, and we had a use 2-3 supporting details, and my last sentence is an concluding sentence, 

I liked learning about Sophie Pascoe. It was very exciting. I found it challenging to use my topic sentence, because I don't really use topic sentences and I'm not used to it. My favourite part was learning about Sophie Pascoe.

Here is my report.

Sophie Pascoes event is swimming. She has five medals - 3 golds and one silver. She is an NZ swimmer.

Sophie Pascoe is 28 years old today. She grew up in Christchurch. She has one sister. Her name is Rebecca Pascoe.

 On 23 September 1995 Sophie Pascoe was accidentally run over by her father on the family lawn mower!

Sophie Pascoe broke a world's record while taking her total to 15 Olympic medals. Sophie Pascoes achievement is swimming at the 2018 Commonwealth Games.

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